Hmmm... I like the little... what are those? Well, the multi colored lights next to his face. And are those scars across his forehead? Kinda intimidating. Well, if I met him in real life I'd be scared. ;__; Anyway, I check for things, and the only thing I saw was that the shading on the left shoe doesn't have the same gradient as the right shoe. I know that since the light is comming from the right that some of the light would be blocked by the right shoe, but I think there should still be some gradient from the yellow to the gray on the left shoe. As it is, it looks kinda flat. But that's just what I think. I can't spot anything else that really sticks out. Very very cool.
I remembered I loved you.
Srsly, though. Is "For the Game" out?
Anyway this is still up to your usual great standard, although I must say I like all the little gadgets.